(illusion is the title of the book, well..story i'm writing during my free time...my apologies for the typos...the keys in the keyboard are so hard to press!!)
I sat still, patiently waiting for my prey to gather. When their backs are unprotected, I pla to go for the kill.

I held my whip and poised, ready to fight. My long hite hair looked silver under the moonlit sky. My hair was tied up in a ponytail and my red eyes re thirsty with bloodust.

The weather was cold and windy. The night was always the best time to hunt. Our prey would have limited vision, which gives us an advantage to attack.

Unfortunately, I was oo focusd on my prey that I didn't pay attention to my surroundings.
I felt two hands gently removing the ribbon from my hair I froze, startled that someone was able to sneak up behind me while I was focused on my prey.

I felt those same hands hold a lock of my hair gently and inhale the scent deeply.

"Such an alluring scent." he murmured. "And such soft hair. You shouldn't tie it up like that."

I turned around and found myself staring at a pair of golden eyes.

"What are you doing here?" I managed to say.

He held a sword a my throat.

"Pity I have to kill you," he crooned. :But I don't want to. I wish to keep you here with me."

I realized my mistake. Now, I was trapped, with no one to help me and no other way to kill him.

I had one option left. Escape.

**Note: this is only the prologue. I've finished the first book, but then, i'm workig on the second book and i'm transferring the rest of the first book stuff to a hardbound notebook.so it'll look professional..tell me what youthink othe prologue...and try to infer what'll happen at the end..except robin and denise...you already read it, so dont spoil it for everyone. (^-^)